
Larry V. answered 01/15/16
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In terms of structure not bad except for your final word. If you want past tense you can say "I was thinking" or "I thought." My English teacher may she rest in peace would have wanted me to use "I thought".
In terns of structure not bad except I think you are okay until the word "and". After that i am not sure what you are trying to say.
First the contraction for "it is"-- it's.
What do you mean by "more gistorical." If you are reading history it is all historical. I wonder if you wanted to express something different there.