Greg T. answered • 02/22/24
Teach English grammar & writing, government, history, econ, math
The message shown above has several issues with the grammar and writing style. The first mistake is at the very beginning of the sentence, where the first word should be capitalized. The last phrase of that sentence is, "to help you don't be afraid" is confusing and does not properly convey what the writer wants to say. The phrase should read, ". . .for someone who can help overcome your fear of writing." The second sentence should be rewritten to read, "I am here to help you if you reach out to me. You can reach me at 4866440482.
Seemingly small grammar issues such as capitalization and spacing between words make a big difference in how a reader comprehends another person's writing. A good writer needs to understand the use of dependent clauses--both at the beginning and end of sentences. A good writer learns to "hear" what he or she is reading.
