
When do I explain my created world scenario in a prologue vs. letting it unfold in the story?
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Breanna C. answered 07/05/19
Italian/Spanish Teacher & Writer
I agree with the last expert answer, something that complex should be developed throughout the story and not all at once to keep your readers engaged. It might help if you create an outline of the details of your planet and reference back to it when you need to insert those details into the story. I would reserve your prologue for details in the plot that need to be established for the reader's understanding rather than to develop the setting.

Gary L. answered 06/29/19
Patient and Experienced Tutor
If your story is the original and not a sequel or prequel, I would say you could make a vague description on the planet and its inhabitants to set the scene, much like at the beginning of plays when they say were and when an act or play is taking place. You do not want to drown the reader in exposition, because it will make developing the story harder and could bore the reader if he or she knows everything that is going on within the first few pages.
Have you ever read a story where you wonder why something is the way it is, then later discover that this person had that because a certain event happened? It is things like that, the unfolding of a story, which entices people to read more; wanting to know what happens next is, exciting.
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Jeremy L.
While it's difficult to judge without sufficient context, my basic philosophy is to "show, don't tell." Related to this point is that if you're having difficulty showing the details you'd like to convey, it may be worth considering whether these details serve a necessary function in furthering the broader purposes of the narrative. I would suggest that, when considering your audience, it is a good rule of thumb to assume that most readers will never read the prologue, and those that do will often do so only after finishing the book. So one question I might ask myself is, "What information, if anything, do I think the reader would still be interested to discover in the prologue once the narrative has finished speaking for itself?" With that said, you definitely want to avoid info-dumping at all costs, but I'm not sure you alleviate the problem by info-dumping in the prologue instead. When I find myself trying to figure out whether the intended audience is more likely to savor the detailed complexity rather than choking on it, I tend to believe that you can only answer the question if you can adequately account for how each detail performs an indispensable element in constructing a coherent whole. In other words, I try to worry less about my audience "getting it" because, to the extent that I can adequately justify how the details are instrumental to the internal consistency of ideas my story is intended to communicate, the complexity itself requires no further justification or explanation.06/29/19