Asked • 06/25/19

Will using real-world cultural vocabulary in a fantasy setting disengage readers?

__If I have certain minor rituals/garments/culture tidbits in a fantasy setting that mirror those of Earth, and I describe them using the real-world vocabulary, will that disengage readers from the fantasy world I've built up?__An example:Let's say I have a fantasy world with absolutely no in-story relation to Earth whatsoever, and I want readers to truly be absorbed in the environment. Let's also say I have a character in this world who wears a [qipao](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cheongsam).The term qipao (or "cheongsam" or "mandarin gown") is a simple and efficient way to describe the garment. However, will using one of those terms get readers thinking about China and therefore draw them out of the fantasy world? Will they start to associate the character with Chinese culture and not with whatever fantasy culture I've placed them in?

Kim H.

Question. In the view and description of some shared details, it is not clear to me the assignment you are trying to create. It appears you are speaking from a writing perspective, although you mention fantasy in regards to readers, which indicates imaginary in thought or a skit expression liken unto a play. Creating your outline in a way that demonstrates clearly and effectively your intended story impression and chararacters will be viewed as comprehensible and interesting to your readers, no matter the cultural setting or language. In the process of writing about earth or somewhere else, do keep in mind, you still, live on earth and therefore be cautious, aware, and reflective how you use language as though you were the reader and the characterized being or person from the planet or place you’re writing about. Note: This comment is based on what I supposed you were saying and I simply mentioned an overall portion. I did not include the sybolism portion currently.
Report

07/06/19

1 Expert Answer

By:

Breanna C. answered • 07/05/19

Tutor
New to Wyzant

Italian/Spanish Teacher & Writer

Still looking for help? Get the right answer, fast.

Ask a question for free

Get a free answer to a quick problem.
Most questions answered within 4 hours.

OR

Find an Online Tutor Now

Choose an expert and meet online. No packages or subscriptions, pay only for the time you need.