
Megan H. answered 04/05/19
Columbia Graduate, Writing Professor at Pratt and Parsons
Every paragraph in your essay does not need to address a different topic, but each should address your main topic in a slightly different way. Each paragraph is doing different work, and should build upon the ones that came before it to support the central idea of the essay. Your topic and your thesis statement should be complex enough that you can find multiple ways to explore it, and those explorations should ideally lead to others. The first sentence (topic sentence) of every paragraph is like a miniature thesis statement, and each provides scaffolding for your main thesis statement.
Think of it this way: a lawyer presents their case using multiple forms of evidence. Each piece of evidence serves a different purpose, and the case may be complicated enough that it needs many forms of evidence to lead to a verdict. Similarly, your paragraphs each contain evidence. In a research paper, evidence also comes in many forms: facts, statistics, surveys, quotes from scholars or experts, tactile descriptions, images and more.
Research is driven by questions. If you're having trouble filling up your ten pages, look at what you have, and ask questions about it. These questions will lead you to more research, and a more complex understanding of your topic. Here are some ways to structure productive research questions: (The following is paraphrased from The Craft of Research, by Wayne Booth, Gregory Colomb and Joseph Williams, a text I use in many of my writing classes.)
Ask about its origins: How did this topic come to be? What came before it? How has in changed or evolved over time? How has our understanding of it changed? How has the way experts study it changed?
Ask about its structure, and meaning: In what contexts do you encounter your topic? How would your topic change if presented in another context? How does it break down into parts? Are there sub-topics within it?
Ask about how your topic is categorized: Is it part of any larger systems? Who studies this topic? To whom does it impact/matter? How?
Compare and contrast: How does your topic compare and contrast to other topics of its kind?
Ask "what if" questions: What if the circumstances within your topic were different?
I always tell my students that the key to a great research paper is the questions you asked before you even started writing it. If you're stuck, that might mean you haven't asked enough questions of the material in front of you.
Lastly: Forget about the 22 paragraphs. In my opinion, if you focus on that, the content of your writing will suffer. You might have 9 long paragraphs and 5 short paragraphs, and reach your 10 pages. One hard thing about writing is that it doesn't always follow a formula: it is always about expressing yourself, and exploring your topic in a way that best represents your ideas.
Works Cited: Booth, Wayne C., et al. The Craft of Research. University of Chicago Press, 2008.