Which is most correct of these three phrases?

Question

At the top part of the front page of my [trading journal](http://www.tradebench.com) website, I have a phrase that I don't know whether is correct or not. Here's what it says: > Online trading journal software including trade planning and money management. The smart way to plan, journal and learn from your trades You get a structured approach to becoming more profitable. For free! I am in doubt about the third line. Is any one or more of the following phrases correct? If so, which one(s) is (most) correct? If not, help in re-writing/re-wording the phrase would be highly appreciated. 1. You get a structured approach to become more profitable. 2. You get a structured approach to becoming more profitable. 3. You get a structured approach for becoming more profitable. English is not my first language so I would appreciate any help on this.

Answer 1

A person is not "profitable." A business can be "profitable."

You are misusing the word.

You can make higher profits.

You get a structured approach to making your business for profitable.

or

You get a structured approach to making higher profits.