Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Question

She did have blood work done in May of 2016 with normal glucose and lipids.  

Answer 1

I think technically it is correct but it sounds a little clunky.  How about this:

 

Blood work done in May of 2016 showed normal glucose and lipids.

 

Does that sound a little more smooth to you?

Answer 2

I think the sentence is correct. The subject is "she," implying "the patient." "She had bloodwork done..." is more direct, but "She did have bloodwork done" is also correct if you want to use "did" for emphasis.

"She did have bloodwork done in May of 2016, which showed normal glucose and lipids." I would substitute "with" for "which showed."