How beautifully the autumn leaves color the landscape. Appeal to the human senses, visual, audio, smell, touch, taste. make the words come alive and unforgettable.
Mira! (means look in Spanish) Look up at the sky. Is it a bird? Is it a plan? No, it's superman.
Commands are sentences. They aren't statements or propositions, but they are very real sentences:
Yield. Stop. Go. Run fast. Tread slowly. Slow down and smell the coffee (or the flowers). Eat healthy. No subject. Run. Eat. Drink. Be merry, for tomorrow we die. just verbs except that last "we" "for" "merry" and "tomorrow"
Eat sh_t. Go to h__l. Hide. Escape. Run for your lives. Don't stop running. Run like the Devil. Run like your life depends on it. Run Spot run. See Dick and Jane. Forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespass against us. (that's technically giving God a command.) Bless us. Or Rev. Wright "Damn the US" or a naval war cry: Damn the torpedoes full speed ahead.
Die, Sheldon, die. painted on Professor Sheldon Cooper's room wall, when Professor Leonard first came to rent the room. Lenny's first clue, big mistake ahead. Sheldon mentioned the wall might need repainting.
Go where no man has gone before. The Enterprise star ship & Capt. Kirk.
A classic legal sentence in a court ruling, from the landmark Pallsgraf negligence case. "Danger invites rescue." but "danger" is the subject, so skip that one. Or maybe switch the words around: "Inviting rescue arises from danger." Still the ABC's of writing, Accuracy, Brevity, Clarity don't like those words like "from" that are so passive, they lull you to sleep. Sleep through this, you're not missing anything, not much anyway.
questions are sentences: Why? When? What? Where? Who? How now brown cow?
What on earth were you thinking?
How on earth was it possible
Why on earth did you do it?
Wherefore art thou Romeo?
Which way did they go? There they go, yonder, that away.
Watch the circus act. Whom do you like best?
put the verb first. (like put or am)
Wherefore art thou Brother? or Oh Brother, Where Art Thou George Clooney comedy movie title.
Am I my brother's keeper?
Is Leonard a keeper like Penny's dad says?
Most eye catching are active colorful verbs, adjectives and adverbs. like the movie title "Kill Bill," conjuring up mental images of the worst for Bill.
Four score and seven years ago, our Fathers brought forth to this continent a new nation conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. That's 7 words and 87 years before getting to the subject.
Poetry might give some more examples.
In 1492 Columbus sailed the ocean blue. In 1493, he got lost at sea. In 1494, he almost hit the ocean floor. In 1495, he was still alive. in 1496, he was in a fix, his calendar off by years.
Once upon a midnight dreary, I woke with something in my head. ...
Try music, song lyrics, which if well known enough, make the reader hear the music in the background in their head. or a jingle they can't get out of their head. livening up the words beyond measure, "Once I loved her, but then I had to kill her." lyrics by the Motley Crue, an oldie but not goldie. Or more recent version by Guns'N Roses. Why on earth would they sing that? Catches your attention though.
Go for drama, controversy to really keep the reader awake and never ever forget what you wrote, even if offensive. Maybe best if it is very offensive. Add some humor though, to redeem yourself and laugh it off if too many complaints. Really grab the reader by his ... testicles. Then squeeze hard. Or kick him when he's down until he screams, "Help." Help is another one word verb command sentence. Try present tense verbs over past. What's past is past, gone, history, and not as lively as today, in the moment.
Dylan Thomas' poem "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" 7 of 8 words not even nouns, 8th, last is a noun but not a subject
Just a few suggestions, for what they're worth, or not. Go for it. Never know what works until tried. Run it up the flagpole and see who salutes. Float a trial balloon or two.
Back in the 1960's Chinese magazines would never mention Mao without a few paragraphs of worshipful adjectives and titles, like "Our dearest courageous, super heroic, compassionate, loving, joyous, divine, .... and it would drone on and on endlessly, never getting close to the subject of the sentence, Mao. that's Chairman Mao Zedong, China's former leader, not Mayo that mayonnaise dressing for hamburgers & food