Add details to the followings paragraph to make it interesting: I woke up. I went to school. I got in trouble. I came home.

Question

The above paragraph is very skeletal, meaning there isn’t much to it. This isn’t the type of paragraph that anyone would find interesting. Think of some things that might happen that could make this a more interesting paragraph and rewrite it.

Answer 1

When I woke up, I was still sleepy. I tried to go back to sleep, but my mom told me it was time to get up. Reluctantly, I got up and got ready for school. When I got to school, my day became ever worse. I was accused of cheating on a test when I was really trying to get an extra pencil out of my backpack. I tried to explain this to the teacher, but she didn’t listen to me. She said she was going to call my mom. I became upset and cried. I was dreading going home. But when I finally got home, I told my mom what happened. Thankfully, she believed me. She even called and spoke with my teacher. By the time they finished talking, the teacher said she believed me also. Now, I am anxious to go back to school tomorrow!