Anita J. answered 12/18/19
Persian Teacher & Material Writer/International Translator/Interpreter
Hi! Although the translation you have written is a beautiful translation, it is not verbatim. The translator has taken liberties with the translation of the third and fourth lines. Any way, here is what you are looking for--I hope:
Gar Jomle-yeh Aafaagh Hameh Gham Beguereft
Bee Gham bood Aan Keh Eshgh Mohkam Beguereft
Yek Zarreh Gar Keh Pie Dar Eshgh Behkooft
Von Zarreh Djahaan Shod Keh Dau Aalam Beguereft
I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions.
Best,
Anita