
Maureen M. answered 06/19/19
Improve Your Writing with a University and Law School Professor
It is almost always better to write with the active voice because writing actively generally means you are writing or speaking more directly. Additionally, with the active voice, you emphasize the concrete character doing something and when people are reading or listening, they want to hear people acting. Active writing is easier to follow.
The only time I write with the passive voice is when I do not want to emphasize a particular individual. For example, look at how a prosecutor and a defense attorney would address a homicide victim.
- Prosecutor: [Defendant] shot Vic.
- Defense Attorney: Vic was shot.