Is "the changes you intend to make will not do us any good" polite?

Question

I would like a polite (formal) way to say: > The changes you intend to make will not do us any good. or should I say "intend on making"?

Answer 1

Hello!

Would you be comfortable, and would it be appropriate, to say "The changes you suggest" (or: "The changes you plan") will not do us any good. In general, the way you phrase this note is polite and diplomatic (not judgmental).

Answer 2

Hello,

I would write:

"The intended changes to the document will not provide adequate support to the [document]."

"The proposed document changes will not provide sufficient support."

"Implementing the intended changes may be detrimental to the [document]."

I hope this helps!

Answer 3

It's a little hard to say without the context, but I would say something along the lines of "The intended changes will not be more beneficial than..." I'm assuming there's some sort of comparison happening here, that there's an alternative, though I could be wrong. It's better if you omit "you" so it doesn't sound like a direct attack. Hope this helps!