Deborah P. answered 05/16/19
English, Reading, Writing Coach
Until ten minutes ago I thought sentences like "The model due to X et al. (2016) explains Y and Z" were common in academic writing. Our post-doc raised doubt about the phrase's correctness, and Googling it I find very few uses. None of them I can confirm were written by a native speaker. So, is that a common/correct way of saying X et.al. proposed the model in their paper from 2016, and if not, what are alternatives?
- Is the phrase a quote? If it is, then does the quote written exactly as written? If its not a quote, then you are citing an idea. Your idea would not need "et.al." and you could use the term "etc." Or you could write: The model due to X is correct (possible, probable, incorrect etc.) according to _______ (name) then et.al. You could also ask your postdoc adviser if a comma between X and et.al. would be acceptable. Have you thought of using the manual(s) for graduate level theses or dissertation writing: Any of these would give you the rules for citing.
- APA (American Psychological Association)
- MLA (Modern Language Association)
- Chicago Manual of Style (or CMOS)
- Turabian
Hopefully, some of these suggestions help.