Nicole S. answered 02/19/17
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Yes, that is correct. I would add one more suggestion towards the end of the sentence: "...after a course of antibiotics did not improve." It is not a complete sentence, and is missing the object (the patient). You would want to say something such as: "...after a course of antibiotics did not improve his condition." I hope that makes sense.