how can i do better in writers workshop?

Question

I am always getting B's on my report card

Answer 1

Hi Isabela,

I completely agree with Paul L., talking to your teacher is a good way of getting clarification on what you need to do to improve your writing and, ultimately, your grades. I would also add that writing is a process that can often require a fair amount of revision and editing. In this regard I have two additional suggestions.

1) Re-read the feedback on your previous assignments. Is there a theme? For example, if you have received the comment "thesis is not clearly stated" then you should, in your next paper, work hard to clearly state your thesis and revise to this end. If the feedback you received is unclear or you are unclear as to how to make the suggested change, make an appointment with your instructor to discuss this issue and get clarification.

2) Ask a classmate, friend, or family member to read your writing and comment honestly on the structure and style of your assignment prior to submission. A proper review should go beyond proofreading. In fact, I would tell my reader to not worry about typos and small grammatical mistakes. Instead, ask the reader to comment on the overall flow of the paper. Does it make sense? Does anything seem out of place? Does it meet the requirements of the assignment (provided along with the paper)? How strong is the introduction? Is the thesis clear? Etc. Once you receive feedback REVISE AND EDIT. I cannot stress enough the importance of this step. This is the point at which a B paper can be turned into an A paper. The final step should be a careful read-through for errors and typos.

Good luck!

Katina

Answer 2

Hi Isabela,

 

This is a question for your instructor.  Most teachers are happy to talk with students about improving grades.  Let your teacher know you want some suggestions to do better, and plan a time to meet together.

 

One suggestion I would offer is to revise a piece you've written.  Even if your teacher doesn't require you to rewrite your work, take one assignment, revise it based on your teacher's comments, and turn in your revision.  This may not improve your grade for that assignment, but it should help you write better in the future.

 

One more suggestion is to do an extra assignment.  Many teachers will adjust grades based on additional work done by a student.  Check with your teacher about doing an extra credit assignment.

 

I hope this helps. 

 

Paul L.