Inactive Tutor answered 03/05/23
"Were" is better in this case because it's a hypothetical question.
Kristen C.
asked 03/03/23I’m writing a poem, and I’m trying to determine if “was” or “were” should be used here in this excerpt:
Is there a bottom?
Would it be better
if there was?
Or worse?
Inactive Tutor answered 03/05/23
"Were" is better in this case because it's a hypothetical question.
Inactive Tutor answered 03/03/23
Poet "ee cummings" ignored all grammar rules and punctuation, in favor of poetry, even for his own name.
"Were" sort of rhymes with "worse," so it's possibly more poetic. Poetry trumps grammar, to a point.
"Were" is also the subjunctive mood for counter factuals. is this a counterfactual? probably? is a bottom possible?
it's also plural, while "was" is singular. Is the subject plural or singular? or ambiguous? is the subject "there" or "bottom"
"Were" sounds more erudite
I'd score it about 3-1 "were" over "was." But it's your poem. Do what makes you feel comfortable.
Inactive Tutor answered 03/03/23
ee cumming ignored all grammar rules and punctuation
"were" sort of rhymes with "worse," so it's possibly more poetic. Poetry trumps grammar, to a point.
"were" is also the subjunctive mood for counter factuals. is this a counterfactual? probably? is a bottom possible?
it's also plural, while "was" is singular. is the subject plural or singular? or ambiguous? is the subject "there" or "bottom"
"were" sounds more erudite
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