Tony O.

asked • 06/24/22

Do I use "I have experienced" or "I had experienced"

For a past-tense fiction, my character is trying to convey in the narrative that he has experienced (not sure if even that's grammatically correct or answered my own question) two hallucinations up to right now in the book. The sentence is:


I have/had experienced only two hallucinations so far in my thirteen years of life: the tape recorder and the woman’s voice from it . . .


I've heard so many writers/editors tell me both. And ever after researching it, I am still confused. I think I'm over thinking it all.

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Tony O.

Thanks, Peter. I've been going back and forth with this for the past 2 days, and still people have been giving me apposing arguments because the story is written in past tense, which I think is what is making this confusing? :)
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06/24/22

Peter F.

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You’re welcome Tony. Sorry for all the confusion other people have been giving you. Even though your story is written in the past tense overall, the fact alone that your 13-year-old character says “so far” implies that he is still living and time is still moving forward. So “I have experienced” is in fact the grammatically correct option here. Good luck with your writing! 🙂
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06/24/22

Bob P.

Just have the character say "experienced." Auxiliary verbs slow down the reader.
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06/24/22

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