"Death has really taken a toll lately." Make sense?

Question

I want to say something nice too my group but Im not sure if this would mske sense.

Answer 1

Hey Natasha!

Would you mind providing a few more details on the kind of answer you might be looking for. Are you in a creative writing group, or are you checking to see if this sentence is grammatically correct? It is, but if you wouldn't mind providing the passage this sentence is from, it may help to provide more context to help with your question. The language is very nonliteral, which is fine, but additional context would be helpful to provide a better answer to your question.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Mack

Answer 2

As written we ask "whose death" and "a toll on who?"

An example of a proper sentence:

Mother's death has taken a toll on the family.