Edit and rewrite the following sentence to eliminate any empty words, wordiness, or redundancy.

Question

Gary England, chief meteorologist at Oklahoma City's Channel 9 and the area's most famous TV weather personality, has dedicated his work and career to tracking tornados and predicting their course.

Answer 1

Hi Tay,

Before: Gary England, chief meteorologist at Oklahoma City's Channel 9 and the area's most famous TV weather personality, has dedicated his work and career to tracking tornados and predicting their course.

After: Gary England, chief meteorologist at Oklahoma City's Channel 9, has dedicated his career to tracking tornados.

In this case, deleting words and phrases, which have the same meaning, considerably improves the sentence.

Answer 2

Oklahoma City's most famous weather personality, Channel 9's chief meteorologist Gary England has dedicated his career to tracking and predicting the course of tornados.