
Kevin O. answered 09/24/21
Tutor Specializing in English, Spanish, and Music
I don't like to follow a structure when I'm writing introductions because it sounds so formal for a normal essay. The only structure I keep is having a thesis at the end. When I'm writing intros my first thought is always what would get me to read this essay? If I don't even want to read it, who else will? I usually will start with some kind of catchy sentence related to my essay. You just have to remember to tease people in the intro so they will be interested in learning more about your topic. Gloss over an interesting fact or two. You thesis should end your introduction and should cover your main point and the main evidence you are using to support that claim. If it's an argumentative essay it's usually good to add a concession point in your thesis and paper where you point out a potentially valid claim that someone arguing against you may have. Research papers are very different. Those are designed to get information out to other people in your field and therefore are very formal. An intro to a research paper does not need a catchy hook because the intended reader is only reading your paper if they are already interested in it. Research paper intros should state your hypothesis, your reason for testing, your methods and materials, and a very brief general summary of your results and conclusions from the results. It's a very formal structure for a formal essay.