Is there any rule of order for time, date, place, building, etc?
I sent an email to confirm my meeting with a person which specified time, date, place, and building on the email like below:> I would like to meet you at 5pm this Sunday in KFC on the first floor in USA Shopping center.There are two things about this sentence. 1. It's overly complicated for me. 2. The order of time, date, place, etc doesn't look right.I wonder if there is a rule of order when writing about time, date, place, etc.
No rule so far as I know. It's a perfectly sensible sentence (though there's a missing 'the' before USA shopping center). It's just complicated because you have a lot of information strung together by way of prepositions.