
Mary M. answered 07/15/19
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Something is missing in both sentences near the end to qualify what ...You might say...Aeronautical information is provided verbally or in writing. (#1. provided by written or verbal what? #2. two words separated by a comma do not make a listing , which includes three or more things). #1 also could state...Aeronautical information is emphasized through (or via) written or verbal statements.Just two suggestions...
Addy K.
Hi Mary first of all thanks for your help. 1. Aeronautical information is provided by means of written, verbal ( including by radio telecommunication) or electromagnetic form only. Is this correct? Please help07/15/19