
Julia S. answered 03/25/19
Show-Everyone-You-Are-Amazing Specialist
Technical communication conventions are generally as follows:
- Most Important Ideas are 1st
- You are writing for the audience. Who are they? What do they need to know?
- Advanced concepts need to be broken down to meet audience requirements.
- Single spaces, not double
- Sentences should be concise, coherent, cohesive and clear.
Generally, the difference between technical communications have more to do with genre (what you are writing), who you are writing for, and your purpose. I find that people who have been trained to do academic writing actually have a hard time switching to a technical communication style, because the writing style is different.
I suspect that both examples are correct, but the better example would need to be chosen based on context, how the ideas fit together.