
Sarah G. answered 01/24/17
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Debra,
I would suggest wording your sentence this way: "There is a low attenuation lesion that is 1 cm round within the posterior segment of the right lobe."
Though this sentence is a bit longer than your original sentence, it flows better. It is easier to understand.
Hope this was helpful! Always happy to provide assistance with writing and editing!
Best,
Sarah G.