Chris R. answered 07/29/18
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Hi Brianna- While I can't directly answer the question for you, I can offer a strategy for how I would approach this. First, I would break down the sentence into dependent clauses, independent clauses, and phrases. That will help you decide on punctuation (such as commas). You could then address the tone of the sentence, how it sounds. Is it formal or informal? Does it read like a science research paper or does it sound like a conversation? Word choice often helps determine the tone as well.
A few ideas to get you started.
Chris