Jonathan G. answered 25d
M.S. Graduate Specializing in Sciences, Essay Writing, College Apps
Greetings!
The issue with college application writing is the student not diving deep enough to SHOW who they really are. Paragraphs telling the reader, "I did this, I did that," has no weight. The student needs to look into who they are and discuss in detail their experiences following by reflecting on what they took from that experience and/or learned. I can definitely help you in creating and brainstorming the ideal essay that will help get you admitted into your college of choice!