The second step for Mn 1/2 reaction is wrong. Here is the procedure
Ion method
MnO4- = Mn2+ (Mn balanced - no 2!!!)
MnO4- = Mn2++4H2O (Balance O with water)
8H++MnO4- = Mn2++4H2O (Balance H with H+)
5e-+8H++MnO4- = Mn2++4H2O (Balance charge with e-)
Oxid. No. Method
MnO4- = Mn2+ (Mn balanced, oxidation state of Mn goes from +7 to +2)
5e-+MnO4- = Mn2+ (Supply electrons for reduction in Ox. States)
5e-+8H++MnO4- = Mn2+ (Balance charge with H+, This method works better than other method for basic situations as you add OH- at this point)
5e-+8H++MnO4- = Mn2+ +4H2O (Use water to balance H or O. The other must also balance if you did it right)
That should help you out for the balancing (cancel the electrons for the overall equation by adding the weighted equations properly)