Dickson F.

asked • 04/16/16

Please explain the grammar mistakes and give marks out of 100 for this piece if writing.

This is a letter written to a magazine which asks to give our opinion about LIVING LIFE TO THE FULL.

To whom it may concern,

I am writing this letter regarding the notice published in the magazine about Living Life to The Full.

To my mind everyone has the right to live their lives to the full. This is the only life we have so we should live it to the full. Unless we live our life to the full we will have to regret in the end. Living life to the full simply means enjoying our life as much as possible. As a matter of fact living life to the full not only means just enjoying life, but it also means enjoying life in a way that you won’t regret in the end.

We completely own the life we live so living it to the full is our own responsibility. To begin with I would mention that we should have self awareness in order to live life to the full. In addition, if we have self awareness we would automatically try out new things. Lack of self awareness might prevent our ability to try out new things. Furthermore we should live in the present in order to enjoy our lives, to make that happen, we should learn from our past instead of keep worrying about our past failures and plan our future based on our past experience, to live our lives successfully. Furthermore we should learn to forgive ourselves if we really want our life to go on easily and happily without many obstacles. In fact, trying not to complicate our life too much would also lead us to live our life to the fullest.

Some people are prevented from living their lives to the full because of many reasons. Being too ambitious and living a very competitive and complicated life might prevent some people from living life to the full. Additionally, some common reasons as lack of self awareness, being unable to forgive yourself for a long time, not understanding the fact that life goes on even we get stuck in the same place over and over and not having the ability to grasp the importance of enjoying the life might prevent us from living our lives to the full.

To summarise, I would mention that living our lives to the full is our own responsibility and regretting or pointing fingers at others in the end won’t give us a second chance to try living a new life to the fullest.

Thank you.

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