Generally correct, but the units could be cleaned up:
Total average speed = (455*2)/13 = 70 mph
Given, her average speed going to the destination was the Return Speed (RS) plus 24 mph...
[455/(RS+24)] + [455/RS] = 13 hours, solve for RS.
Factoring out 455 [1/(RS+24) + 1/RS] = 13;
Dividing both sides by 455 and solving the LCD, RS/[RS(RS+24)] + (RS+24)/[RS(RS+24)] = 13/455;
Multiplying both sides by the LCD, RS + (RS+24) = 13/455 * RS(RS+24);
Further simplifying, 2RS+24 = 13/455 * (RS^2 + 24RS)
Multiplying both sides by 455/13 produces 455/13 (2RS+24) = RS^2 + 24RS
So RS^2 + 24RS - (910/13RS + 840) equals RS^2 - 46RS - 840
Plugging into the Quadratic Equation, RS = [-(-46) +/- Sqrt (46^2 - 4(1)(-840)] / 2(1)
So, RS = [46 +/- Sqrt (2116 + 3360)] / 2 = (46 +/- 74) / 2...
Therefore RS = 60 mph (we can eliminate 14 mph), so the speed going to the destination was 84 mph?
Let's plug those solutions in to verify:
74 mph over 455 miles = 455/74 hours = 5.4167 hours
60 mph over 455 miles = 455/60 hours = 7.5833 hours
Adding up both hours arrives at 13.0 hours. Q.E.D.