Calvin L.

asked • 09/03/13

Can anyone help me write a story using these words

bluff
cautious
consist
despise
haven
mimiature
monarch
obstacle
struggle
treacherous
vivid
 

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Bethann D. answered • 09/03/13

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Patti S.

I like that you gave tips, rather than, of course, writing a sample story, and doing the assignment for Calvin. My eye drew me to your comment about using verbs, such as treacherous, vivid, and cautious, but those are actually adjectives, which is a minimal oversight, but attention to detail is important when providing tips as such. I also thought it would be helpful for Calvin, to have been given, perhaps an example sentence or two, with each of your three steps. I do like how you listed three steps for him, to giving him a starting off point!! Nice idea:)
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