
Alison R. answered 05/19/21
Teaching the Next Generation of Fiction Writers
The best way to do this is to go back over your writing and read it "aloud" in your head slowly. Most of the time, you'll find your own grammatical mistakes by "hearing" the words instead of just looking at them. Here are some advanced things to look for:
Verify your verbs and tense (past vs. present), remove adverbs (words that describe an action);
Turn passive verbs into active ones (look for has, have, been, is, or was before the verb. Example: He was sitting by the door. = He sat by the door.);
Look for word echoes (using the same word over and over, especially in the same paragraph) and use synonyms.
If typing, fix homonyms (aka autocorrect chose the wrong word)
And make sure you format with an introduction, thesis statement, supporting evidence, and conclusion; and that your paragraphs start with the main fact of the statement, then supporting evidence for that point.
Good luck!