Patience A. answered 12d
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A strong case can be made that Pauline is an unreliable narrator, but the best argument will acknowledge that the novel deliberately makes it difficult to determine who is telling the complete truth. Start by looking at moments in Chapter Four where Pauline’s narration appears shaped by her emotions, beliefs, or desire to present herself in a particular way. Pay particular attention to contradictions between what Pauline says about herself and what other characters or narrators have previously established.
You can organize the response around three pieces of textual evidence: first, a passage showing Pauline’s tendency to embellish or interpret events according to her own perspective; second, a moment where her account conflicts with information provided elsewhere in the novel; and third, a passage that reveals something about what Pauline wants the reader to believe about her. For each example, explain not only what happens but why Pauline might have a reason to present it that way. Include the page number after each quotation or specific piece of evidence.
A useful thesis might be: “Pauline functions as an unreliable narrator because her account of events is shaped by her personal insecurities and desire to control how others perceive her, causing her to distort or selectively interpret what happens.” Then use the evidence from Chapter Four to prove that claim rather than simply labeling Pauline a liar. Also remember that an unreliable narrator isn't necessarily someone who lies about everything; the interesting question is where her perspective becomes unreliable and what that unreliability reveals about her character.