By the Waters of Babylon

Question

How does the author's use of dashes hint at John's behavior and emotions as he observes the room?

Answer 1

I’m not sure what document you’re discussing, but when I’m writing I often use dashes as sort of super commas, to give a big pause, whether for hesitation, waiting for another character to speak or act, or maybe for fear of someone else speaking or acting. See what seems to fit John in this piece.