
Max M. answered 04/02/19
Harvard Literature major with 20 years of coaching writers
It may not be about murder, but I wouldn't say it's "about plums" either. It's about what the speaker is doing.
Of course, there is never a correct answer to "what is this poem (or novel, or play, or song, or...) about?" But a good place to start is always with what's actually written; what do we actually know?
"This is just to say"
Ok, so it's a note
"I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox"
Talking about real, ordinary, everyday, human-scale stuff; we're not in the realm of kings, gods, or eternal human truths. Also, on a practical level, he's close enough to the person he's writing too that he has access to their icebox.
"And which you were probably saving for breakfast"
He understands what he did--he's not trying to claim innocence. Also, if it's breakfast, maybe they live together--a bit more intimacy hinted at there.
"Forgive me."
He's apologizing.
"They were delicious"
Or is he apologizing?
"So sweet and so cold"
Hmmm...kind of rubbing it in, isn't he? What does that do to the apology? How does that change our reading of the beginning of the note? How does that change our understanding of this relationship? Do these questions apply to our own relationships?
I'm all for deep close reading, especially of poetry, but one always runs the risk of overdoing it, maybe even projecting one's own concerns onto reading. That often seems to be doubly true for Williams's poetry. Yes, poets traffic in metaphor, but there's enough actually on the page, I think, to make it stand up on its own terms.
Murder? Sexual assault? Sure, you can make the argument. But my question would be: are you getting that *from* the poem, or are you reading it *into* the poem? Seems to me like you need a pretty dark imagination to read that into this.