Robert M. answered 12/27/20
Tutor
New to Wyzant
Student Mentor For Art & Writing
- carlotta should be capitalized as Carlotta
- The word "why", which starts a new sentence should be capitalized as Why
- The word "chose" makes no sense.
- jish is misspelled, and should be spelled Josh.
- the portion of the sentence "so how did josh get 19 minutes" contains two errors. josh should be capitalized as Josh, and the word "there" should be inserted before the word "get".