
Jane P. answered 06/17/19
Phillips Exeter Academy English teacher & college essay coach
Hi! Your current thesis is a bit confusing, and doesn’t seem to answer the question. My advice is to take a few steps back. Can you tell me ONE significant way in which he changes? Your first job is to find those changes *in the text*... or in the artwork. :)
When is your essay due? I’d love to help you with it!