Is this a good haiku

Question

A weeping willow 

is a beautiful zen view

which can inspire

Answer 1

A haiku contains 3 lines.  The first has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables and the 3rd has 5 syllables.

 

It appears that the above prose contains 5, 7 and 4.  Inspire contains 2 syllables.  Perhaps your haiku's last line could begin "which inspires ________" and fill in the blank with a 2 syllable word that fits your message.