Phillip also analyzed the essay content from the college admission officer's perspective and gave positive feedback on the content my son chose. The edited draft was a very polished essay ready to be used. Although this is just our first time working with Phillip, we will definitely engage him more on additional essay edits soon. There are other essays we will need his guidance from idea brainstorming, outlines, content development, sentence structure, to final draft.
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However, he refused to give me any ideas or discuss the essay together. He said to me that he would only read and edit the essay after I finish. He keeps saying that this is ILLEGAL and UNETHICAL! But I told him that my school writing center tutors also do the same thing. But because of their schedule didn't work out for me, I'd rather look for a private tutor. He just told me that he would only do edit/correct grammar on my essay. That's fine.
I realized that without Olya's support, my essay would be in bottom 5 % of med. school essays list. I decided to start over ;-(
In real time, Olya and I were discussing and critically thinking over the main theme and ideas of my paper, so my essay was growing faster than I could imagine. My essay obtained the 1st person narrative form and initial stage of LIFE! My friends, my essay needs more life, so I will keep you updated soon.