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However, he refused to give me any ideas or discuss the essay together. He said to me that he would only read and edit the essay after I finish. He keeps saying that this is ILLEGAL and UNETHICAL! But I told him that my school writing center tutors also do the same thing. But because of their schedule didn't work out for me, I'd rather look for a private tutor. He just told me that he would only do edit/correct grammar on my essay. That's fine.
I realized that without Olya's support, my essay would be in bottom 5 % of med. school essays list. I decided to start over ;-(
In real time, Olya and I were discussing and critically thinking over the main theme and ideas of my paper, so my essay was growing faster than I could imagine. My essay obtained the 1st person narrative form and initial stage of LIFE! My friends, my essay needs more life, so I will keep you updated soon.
She had vast experience with was needed in a personal essay to stand out to Ivy League schools and prepared my essay to be competitive for admissions. She didn't just help me complete a cookie-cutter essay but helped me form a unique essay, while still providing admissions officers the extra info they want in personal statements. She's also a great editor and helped my essay become a lot more concise and easier to read for admissions officers.