Asked • 07/11/19

My views on the central theme of my book have changed - how do I bring in that nuance?

I've been working on a fantasy story that explores the creation and evolution of religion. But I'm struggling with what I'm fundamentally trying to say regarding religion.When I first began, I was much more militantly atheist than I am now, and my original plan was to build toward a grand exposure of a particular religion, as being merely an exaggerated, much-embellished portrayal of an event from ancient history.But since then my own views have evolved. I'm still non-religious, but I better understand why some people have a faith, and the original conclusion to my story lacks the depth I desire.Now I'm at a loss. I'm thinking of building the story as focusing on several characters who each view religion in different ways, following their growth. But I'm not sure how to do that, and I'm not even really sure what I'm trying to say. I've tried listening to speakers discussing the philosophy of religion, to try and find something that clicked for me, but that was no help.Where do I go from here, and how can I finish my story?

Breanna C.

In academic writing, when we present our theses ideas, there's always a question of "So what?", meaning, what are you trying to prove/argue? I think that applies to your situation in that you said yourself that you don't know what you're trying to say. I think that's the entire crux of your writer's block: you don't have a desired outcome anymore. I would recommend taking some time to re-read your story and do a reverse outline of what ideas you've introduced so far and see if you can't better connect those ideas for a final 'so what'. Maybe also write an outline of the various different conclusions you've thought of and see how they connect/challenge/engage the rest of the story. I think once you find a new desired outcome your writer's block will vanish.
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Taylor-Grey M. answered • 07/17/19

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