Asked • 04/26/19

Appropriate word order in a long sentence?

I composed the below sentences to mean The company should contribute to the sustainability by: 1. Proactive development of environmentally friendly products 2. Reducing environmental load Which sentence from the below mean the above more correctly? Example 1 >>The company should contribute to the realization of a sustainable society by reducing and lowering environmental loads in each step of the lifecycle of environmentally-friendly products, from proactive development to ultimate disposal. Example 2 >>The company should contribute to the realization of a sustainable society by proactively developing environmentally-friendly products, and reducing and lowering environmental loads in each step of their lifecycle from production to ultimate disposal.

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